The camping trip

Today was the day of my families annual camping trip. I was so excited.  So that morning we left and went to the camp site. Once we got there we set up our tents and put all our gear out. Me and my older brother had nothing to do so our parents made us get fire wood. When we were walking in the forest we found two huge footprints. My brother took off his shoe and put it next to the footprints. It made the footprints even bigger so we both ran back to the camp site and told our parents they didn’t believe us. What would happen to us.

By Jasmine

3 thoughts on “The camping trip”

  1. Hi Jasmine
    This is a good narrative piece that I enjoyed reading. I like the way that the story is left on a bit of a cliffhanger as the unknown of who or what made the footprints and whether they are still there becomes apparent.

    Thank you for sharing.

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