The Lonely bear  

The Lonely bear                                                                                                                                                     one rainy day their was a lonely bear that had now one to play with he tried to play with the bunnys but they did not want to play he tried to play with the birds but they did not want to play ether then he tried to play with the crocks they also did not want to play the bear was lonely the bear was walking then he he saw a bear that was lonely to  the lonely bear when of o the other lonely bear it was a girl lonely bear the lonely bear said are you ok the girl bear said i am so lonely no one wants to play with me do you what to play with me the lonely bear said the girl lonely bear said ok and they played all day together the end

from Daniel

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  1. Great story, but I kinda found it hard to breath while reading… (In other words, check over your work and please add fullstops)

    -Grape

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