The Day by Abbey

One stormy day there was a village. And in the village there is a lot of a houses but only one person. It was weird but he was all by himself there was no-one there but him. He didn’t know what lies ahead, he was worried that someone would come and take all of his money. But one sunny day he saw something.  It was another person, they said, ” I am going to help you,” and they built the village with stronger materials and then people started coming to stay and live there and that was it.

2 thoughts on “The Day by Abbey”

  1. Abbey,
    I love how positive your piece is. By using the detail ‘sunny day’ I could tell there would be a mood turning point and then came the person ready to help.
    Thank you for your writing. I look forward to reading more soon.
    Keep writing.
    Mrs. G., Guilderland, NY, USA, Team 100

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