…so, what lies ahead of…

There was a boy his name was Jonathan. He was 27 years old. He loved travelling and exploring. His friend John was 30 years old and he loved travelling as well. One day they decided to go into a cave and explore. John had never explored the cave neither had Jonathan. John went first then Jonathan, there were two ways to go left or straight . They had decided to stick together and go straight. They ran into a dead and but they were curious what was beyond. …so, what lies ahead of the cave?

-Broc

One thought on “…so, what lies ahead of…”

  1. We like your punctuation. You used an ellipsis and a question mark as well as capital letters and full stops. Next time your writing could be even better with more exciting adjectives.

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